Talk:Trellen Conflict

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The Conflict and Aftermath section aren't written in Neutral perspective. Holowan never signed a PSA. The Wedge Achilles claim should be written more as a rumor. Ubis Vrand 16:36, 25 June 2015 (GMT)

The Wedge comment was written in a style that indicates that there is an element of conjecture "It is believed". Perhaps a clarification that this is the Imperial view is required. I know that Gabriel made a public statement regarding the last major NR Chief of State election on their website, urging them to note vote for any candidate that advocated dissolving the senate. If no proof of Halowan signing a PSA or any other treaty with NR can be provided, the article should be modified accordingly. -- Prard`aga Rono 16:58, 25 June 2015 (GMT)