Talk:Corporate Alliance
Revision as of 14:35, 2 March 2011 by Siejo Kutol (talk | contribs)
What can be addressed to make this more neutral?
Well first of all you should always add a signature to your posts (type "--~~~~"), as for making it neutral, I would delete it all and rewrite it again looking on it from another perspective, showing both sides good and bad. Or let someone know of your history and let him/her write it for you. --Ryan Roche 22:57, 28 February 2011 (GMT)
Yes, I get that but reading the article.. its more like a summary of who did what.. This guy founded it.. this guy became leader... etc. What is not neutral about it. thats my question "--Siejo Kutol 19:35, 2 March 2011 (GMT)"
