Talk:Siejo Kutol

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If the article can be cleaned up (made a bit more NPOV, removing conversations and statements to the quote template or similar rather than being in-line, etc), and maybe given a few more images, I'd like to have this as a featured article at some stage. Orphaea Imperium 06:27, 8 March 2011 (GMT)

I will work on that this weekend and do what i can to get it to par. --Siejo Kutol 17:13, 8 March 2011 (GMT)

excellent article! Horthon Gorthy 14:23, 10 March 2011 (GMT)

Thanks.. I need advice on how to fix the "conversations" part of it.. as I see what you mean.. it flows and then just jumps into conversations. Im not sure how to fix it. any advice would rock --Siejo Kutol 17:02, 10 March 2011 (GMT)

I would remove them, this isn't a novel it is an encyclopedic entry. Horthon Gorthy 18:27, 10 March 2011 (GMT)

I agree.. but the Death of my wife is important I think. I just need to figure a way to put them in.. more factually. Siejos wife was killed by adoy baba :P --Siejo Kutol 19:41, 10 March 2011 (GMT)

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