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Well first of all you should always add a signature to your posts (type <nowiki>"--~~~~"</nowiki>), as for making it neutral, I would delete it all and rewrite it again looking on it from another perspective, showing both sides good and bad. Or let someone know of your history and let him/her write it for you. --[[User:Ryan Roche|Ryan Roche]] 22:57, 28 February 2011 (GMT) | Well first of all you should always add a signature to your posts (type <nowiki>"--~~~~"</nowiki>), as for making it neutral, I would delete it all and rewrite it again looking on it from another perspective, showing both sides good and bad. Or let someone know of your history and let him/her write it for you. --[[User:Ryan Roche|Ryan Roche]] 22:57, 28 February 2011 (GMT) | ||
Yes, I get that but reading the article.. its more like a summary of who did what.. This guy founded it.. this guy became leader... etc. What is not neutral about it. thats my question "--[[User:Siejo Kutol|Siejo Kutol]] 19:35, 2 March 2011 (GMT)" | |||
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What can be addressed to make this more neutral?
Well first of all you should always add a signature to your posts (type "--~~~~"), as for making it neutral, I would delete it all and rewrite it again looking on it from another perspective, showing both sides good and bad. Or let someone know of your history and let him/her write it for you. --Ryan Roche 22:57, 28 February 2011 (GMT)
Yes, I get that but reading the article.. its more like a summary of who did what.. This guy founded it.. this guy became leader... etc. What is not neutral about it. thats my question "--Siejo Kutol 19:35, 2 March 2011 (GMT)"