Talk:Siejo Kutol
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If the article can be cleaned up (made a bit more NPOV, removing conversations and statements to the quote template or similar rather than being in-line, etc), and maybe given a few more images, I'd like to have this as a featured article at some stage. Orphaea Imperium 06:27, 8 March 2011 (GMT)
I will work on that this weekend and do what i can to get it to par. --Siejo Kutol 17:13, 8 March 2011 (GMT)
excellent article! Horthon Gorthy 14:23, 10 March 2011 (GMT)
Thanks.. I need advice on how to fix the "conversations" part of it.. as I see what you mean.. it flows and then just jumps into conversations. Im not sure how to fix it. any advice would rock --Siejo Kutol 17:02, 10 March 2011 (GMT)
- I would remove them, this isn't a novel it is an encyclopedic entry. Horthon Gorthy 18:27, 10 March 2011 (GMT)
- I agree.. but the Death of my wife is important I think. I just need to figure a way to put them in.. more factually. Siejos wife was killed by adoy baba :P --Siejo Kutol 19:41, 10 March 2011 (GMT)
- I would say even that isen't important enough. this should read, siejo did this, then this, then this. that is what the article should be like. quotes should be very important and sparsely used. Horthon Gorthy 13:22, 11 March 2011 (GMT)
- Check out my page for how quotes might work. You can tweak it perhaps to include longer quotes or short snippets of conversations between multiple people. Orphaea Imperium 04:21, 12 March 2011 (GMT)
- ty guys ill take a peak and do some work --Siejo Kutol 03:08, 13 March 2011 (GMT)
- Check out my page for how quotes might work. You can tweak it perhaps to include longer quotes or short snippets of conversations between multiple people. Orphaea Imperium 04:21, 12 March 2011 (GMT)
use the preview button dont just submit all the time Horthon Gorthy 23:01, 14 March 2011 (GMT)
